Enshrouded by the
inky darkness
befogged by the
hazy brume…
Ashen heart laments
over my smothered
dreams in the
tragic gloom…
Each breath like
a heavy burden,
emotions screaming out
of my deepest wounds….
In this dolorous ordeal
of my unrequited love
and unanswered
prayers….
Tattered soul
yearns for the
end of the endless
night of despairs….
As…the webs of
my dream catcher…
no longer catch
my nightmares…
©Pure Reflections, 2019
Love the dark and dreadful emotional imagery your words have drawn Sarika. Well penned 👍
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Thank you so much Radhika 💕 for being there..this precious comment means a lot…🙏
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As…the webs of
my dream catcher…
Nice usage. Good work 😍🥰👍
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Thank you so much dear Tushara ❤️… your comments means a lot dear 🌺
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Somthered dreams in the tragic gloom, this is so deep ,beautifully written Sarika 😍🌟
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Thank you so much..Prashanti….for dropping this lovely comment here.. really appreciate it..🌹♥️
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Wonderful poem, Sarika! Your last verse is especially brilliant and the entire piece deserves a standing ovation! Thank you for participating in the prompt.
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I m so flattered and humbled by this comment of yours.. Eugenia 💕…so happy that you liked it… means a lot… always a pleasure to participate in your prompts.. Thank you so much.. Lots of hugs to you…🤗🌹
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You’re most welcome! 😉
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Reblogged this on BrewNSpew and commented:
Sharing Sarika’s take on the weekly prompt.
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amazing 🌼🌼
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Thank you so much dear Sheetal 💕
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Bravo! That was a absolutely terrific! The flow was so good and it created a beautiful atmosphere
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Thank you so much.. Mathew..glad you liked it…🌷🌷
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Truly.
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Beautifully written ✌🏻
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Thank you so much..dreamer❤️
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That’s beautiful,,,, 🙏
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Many thanks to you 🌷🌷
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Many welcome to you😊🌷🌷🌷
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Beautifully expression of night terrors, such vivid imagery. YonnieInHiscare
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Thank you so much for reading and your lovely comment here ..dear🌹❤️
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You are certainly welcome 💜🌸
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OUTSTANDING Sarika!!! There was such a rhythm to it …. and the emotions were quite palpable ….👏👏👏
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Thank you so much dear Yeka…for these lovely appreciating words… really means a lot💕💕
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So richly deserved as always Sarika! 💕💕💕💕💕
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Thanks again dear.. lots of hugs to you 🤗
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Beautiful. Quite relatable.
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Thank you 🌷
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Wow Sarika ❤️❤️ great poem..
Love it 😍
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Many thanks to you.. Jyoti 💕
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Always welcome Sarika ❤️
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“As…the webs of
my dream catcher…
no longer catch
my nightmares…”. <—– the best lines!!!
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Thank you so much for your kind visit… means a lot..🌷
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You are most welcome
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deep
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Thank you 🌷
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nice to meet you
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It’s nice to meet you too..🙂
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you are from India, right ?
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Yess
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me too
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👍
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I am from kerala, where you’re from?☺😍
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I m from Mumbai
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Oh I have visited there once
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Good job of adding beauty to something as scary as nightmares.
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Thank you so much for stopping by and dropping this precious comment here..🌹❤️
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This is what I call, “a writer’s write up”…. Beautiful creation indeed… Well penned… 🙂 🙂
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I m so humbled by this appreciation… thank you so much.. Ashish..🌷
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You deserve this… Keep writing… 🙂
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Sure I will… thanks 🙏
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Always deep with the tragic stuff..💙
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Thanks a lot for this remark… Samyak…was just a demand of the prompt..☺️
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Turned out to be great!💙
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Thanks 🙂
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